Sunday, July 20, 2008

Sunday Scribblings; Ghosts

I am participating in Sunday Scibblings this week.
Below is my first contribution to this weekly challenge.

She runs through the wooded lot like a horse in the wind. Her pale skin reflects the moonlight with a glow of blond hair flowing freely behind. All is quiet; no snap of sticks, no rustle of leaves. She never makes a sound. Little Elisabeth moves through the night air until she reaches her resting place. So soft is her touch to the cold stone. Her image thins and the air thickens as her misty molecules transcend into the ground. All that is left is the cold worn out stone that reads;

Elisabeth Grant
Our little lamb

I have joined Sunday Scribblings this week. Our assignment;ghosts. The above essay is a piece of a fictional story that I am writing. Visit Sunday Scribblings and take the links to read some very inspiring essays. Enjoy!



  1. WOW MYA! This is so powerful! You truly have a beautiful gift. I LOVE your writing!!!!


  2. Beautiful little piece of flash fiction.


    Thank you for stopping by.

  3. sad little lamb beautifully scribed!!!

  4. Gosh Mya this is a haunting piece,
    With exquisite descriptions placed,
    And ghosts, that evaporate from sight,
    Your talent Ma'am must be embraced.

  5. Very cool, Mya! I can't wait to read more! The image is very ghostly.

  6. Welcome to Sunday Scribblings!

    This is lovely and sad, but also peaceful and sweet. One feels for the child's parents for losing their "little lamb".

    A very nice piece of writing!

  7. Hi Mya, thanks for your nice comment to me.
    Welcome to Sunday Scribblings! I have found it very inspirational.
    I loved your touching story, so sad to read her age. Yet there was something so peaceful in it as well. I found myself wondering how she passed? Was it from a fall from a horse? Poor little lamb.

  8. I think you've got some talent girl...hope to read another next Sunday!

  9. A very touching piece of writing.I look forward to reading more.

  10. Love it Mya !!! and you thought I was spooky, LOL. I guess I should have signed up for the ghost post :) You all can see my Full Moon post on July 18th. I was a bit early I guess, LOL. Love the writing too!

    Karen at Ciderantiques


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